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Shades Of Erotic Poetry


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Stand before me
Look deep into my eyes, and really see me
I'm offering you my soul.. completely
Just reach out and take it
But first...
Make me naked
Kiss me...
Kiss me softly
Kiss me tenderly
Kiss me deep
Kiss me like you missed me
Kiss me all over
Lay a moist smoldering kiss on me that awaken my weary soul
A kiss so hot it put curls in my toes
Now touch me
Caress me tenderly
Caress me all over
Caress my skin like it craves your every touch
Caress me like heroin caress a junkies blood vein
Caress me until my soul wakes up and then goes completely insane
Caress the extension of me
Caress it with your silken touch
Look at it
Hold it
Squeeze it
Stroke it
Lick it
Taste its manly flavor
Softly kiss it with your gentleness
Swallow it like you mean it
Bring my release like no other can
Bring it from the depths of my soul
Bring it slowly, so I will always remember the rapture of its blissfulness
Bring it so my soul will never need its darken blanket any more
Bring it so my soul will stand tall in its naked glory for all to see
Now touch me like no other, and warm me inside out
Touch me all over with your fervor touch, making my soul not lonely anymore
Give me a touch so complete it makes me weak
A touch so complete that it knocks me off my feet
A touch that brings peace and comfort to my wondering soul
A touch that brings my soul out of the darkness, and into the internal light
A touch so complete.... it completes me
... Am I being selfish to want your passion complete?..

Posted by 1manview at 5:50 PM - 11 Comments   Add a Comment  
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Whew! best post yet I think.  
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by indian (PM , CC ) on Monday April 7, 2008 @ 1:00 PM




Thank you very much. I actually brought this poem over from the Intrigue poems. I felt I needed to separate the erotic side of me from the rest. I'm glad I'm started to do that because I got a comment yesterday from someone I felt was too young to be even blogging. At least if it's in the adult section, they know they shouldn't be there. As always, your comments are welcomed.  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Monday April 7, 2008 @ 3:29 PM




You are a gifted writer.  
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by Desari (PM , CC ) on Monday April 7, 2008 @ 8:00 PM




Coming from a real writer like yourself, you humble me. Thank you for the comment and it was nice to see you again.  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Tuesday April 8, 2008 @ 12:14 PM




you have made a major error and the error appears in all your poetry. but that is just my humble opinion and i am a nobody.
ann
 
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by Ann of Hearts (PM , CC ) on Tuesday April 8, 2008 @ 10:37 PM




I once was told a person should learn something new everyday. So I'm listening.  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Tuesday April 8, 2008 @ 11:04 PM




i did not read your other blog. i only read this one. your error is that you are wearing your ego glasses. all your poety in this blog is selfish poetry. (make me do this, make me do that, do this to me, do that to me) (teach me, feel me, kiss me) oh my gosh i feel sorry for the girl you are writing about. i personally do not like this. it looks like this is written by a male for other males. if that is what you want then ok. but after reading this i would not want to kiss you, instead i want to slap you silly. try taking your ego out of your poetry. dont be so selfish. dont be so me me me me me. anyway that is only my opinion and i am a nobody. thanks for letting me read your blog  
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by Ann of Hearts (PM , CC ) on Thursday April 10, 2008 @ 7:45 PM




I do see your concerns, hopefully hindsight will prevail in the near future, I sent you a PM.  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Friday April 11, 2008 @ 12:03 PM




Well I just finished reading your comments here. So now I suppose you're going to change the style of your writing huh?  
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by indian (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 13, 2008 @ 11:53 AM




I apoligize for my last comment everyone is entitled to change the way they express theirselves and their writing.  
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by indian (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 13, 2008 @ 11:57 AM




My apology India, my comment was not meant for you. Ann of hearts has an issue with me personally. I welcome all comments, I think. But I do have a habit that showed. I'm even happy ann of hearts spoke up, it made me think more about how I was writing and arranging my post. I haven't been writing that long so I really don't have a style yet, just some habits I need to tweak. I really never thought so many people would even read my poetry. Nor did I ever thought I would meet so many talented and wonderful people like yourself. ... Me ...  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 13, 2008 @ 12:59 PM


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

   
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