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Shades Of Erotic Poetry


 Tongulingus (unedited)
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Eyes open
Two small, round, soft, pillows surrounds my head
Her fingers caress my head with a soothing touch
As my lungs take a deep breath, my nostrils fill with the smell of a romantic dance
I swallow, and the taste of her hidden valley is on my bright pink tenderized tongue
Slowly, the image of raw lust visualize in my mind, and how I got to the moment of now
The visual is sweaty, romantic, erotic, and was a little nasty at times
But the total act was beautiful
There I was, lying on the floor on top of my favorite red pillow, relaxing while listening to soft music
Suddenly there she stood in the doorway, with my favorite red silk shirt wrapped tightly on her body
First, she gave me her side view, showing off the firmness in her thick thighs, and the lovely shape of her legs
With a slow seductive turn, she lets my eyes feast on her backside
The smoothness of her taut round butt cheeks, and the deep slit between them creased my shirt
The power in her thighs was ever present, she swayed slowly side to side, with an I know you want some of this disposition
After showing off her prize backside, she giggles and swung around facing me
Her smile beams as she watch the effects of her vision has had on me, as my manhood pushed a big indentation in my pants
Her shirt was partially open, only to the point of showing the sides of her round breast, the insignia of her breast pushed through the thin density of the silky fabric, showing the largeness and length of her blood filled nipples
The front of the shirt barely covered the silky hair on her love triangle, teasing my imagination as the lights behind her showed the silhouette shape of her haven folds
With a slow seductive walked toward me, she eased across the room
With each step, she loosen a button on my silk shirt, until I had a full view of her loveliness showing
My eyes widen as they grace upon her creamy soft skin
At that moment, I wanted to be that shirt caressing her skin
Her seductive walk had me in a trance; she slowly strolled up to me, positioning herself over my head so I was looking directly at her heaven folds
They were already moist; her pink lips were swollen and partially open
Reaching up, my hands eased up against her sensitive inner thighs; as my fingers gently caressed her soft skin, an outlet of breath is heard as her legs weaken from my caress
My fingertips eased across the tautness of her thighs, then slowly their touch caressed the roundness of each butt cheek, her heat was felt on my hand
A slow caress slowly down her inner thighs, followed by a gentle rake of my nails across her tender flesh made her legs suddenly dip, as a quick breath was pushed out of her lungs
Quickly my hands gently cradled her round butt, until she regained her composure
She wiggle her body as my caress eased toward her inflamed lips, stopping at the edges, circling, barely touching, teasing her, making her passion grow
Her hips wiggled side-to-side trying to catch my elusive caress
After toying with her growing passion; my caress finally touches her wet swollen lips
Her back arched, her legs stiffen and shivered, her breath came in short bursts as my caress circled then dipped into her haven slit
Her head lowered, with her eyes open wide, she glanced down at me
With a slow descent, she lowers her body until her smothering haven was inches from my waiting lips
My fingers caress her hips and pulls her folds closer so I could caress them with my tongue, the heat from her haven was radiating onto my face
As her folds came closer, I could see her nectar easing down her thighs
Her intoxicating womanly scent touches then fill my nostrils, as my tongue softly licks her swollen pink lips
With a quick flick of the tongue, the sweet taste of her womanly juices was on them, her body flexed tight until the intensity of the sensation of my tongue caressing her haven folds diminished
She held still as my tongue laid butterfly licks all over her haven folds
As my mouth gently suckle on her lips, her knees jammed into the side of my head
I release, she releases, I suck, she jams, I release, she releases, a giggle, a laugh fills the air
I quick dart between her folds brings a gasp, quickly followed by a loud moan, her hips tilt as my tongue circles up and down her slit
A quick breath of air, then a deep sigh escapes her throat, as my tongue lays butterfly soft licks on her outer lips, barely touching, skipping around in circles, sliding in between, but not inside, riding up and down, teasing, tasting, darting, all so docile on her lips
She lowers her haven closer, my tongue parts her lips, sliding in deeper, getting its first taste of her pink flesh
A moan, a slow roll of the hips, she makes tender love to my tongue, gently
rolling, pushing grinding, gliding my tongue through her slit
The constant changing of speed of her hips velocity, plunges my tongue deeper, or barely inside her haven folds
The pace quickens as she plunges my tongue as deep inside her as it will go
Faster, harder, her mouth opens, but no sound comes out as she becomes breathless
My eyes glance up and watch her every movement, lost in heat she squeezes her breast, rolls her nipples between her fingers, as she sex herself on the wet caress of my tongue
Her hips circle in a wide pattern, slow and precise, making sure my tongue touch every inch of her haven
The pace quickens, her hips snap back and forth in short durations, as an orgasmic look is on her face, but her orgasm eludes her
My tongue wonders searching for her clitoris, it's found swollen, hard, and erect like my manhood
My tongue darts around its base as her body vibrates
As my tongue caresses it sides, she wiggles her hips, her arms shake while tightly holding onto my head, as she directs my tongue every strikes, moving her hips so her clitoris is hit from every angle
A butterfly lick on the tip of her clitoris produces a yelp, my mouth suck her clit inside of it, while my tongue does a soft shoe tap dance on it
As her body bucks, she lets out a snort, another buck, and another snort.
A long ear deafening moan, emerges deep from within her lungs
Her clitoris bucks free of my lips, a quick tight grab of her hips, a firm but gentle pull downward, my tongue caress her pink flesh, and rams it deep inside her, while she bucks wildly
With all her weight on my tongue tip, she rocks back and forth pushing my tongue as deep as it will go inside her pink flesh
A rain of clear fluid runs down my face, as the power in her legs lock my head in place
A low half scream, part half moan echoes across the room as her body quakes, and her womb vibrates on my none wavering tongue
Wave after wave, her orgasm rage
Her body becomes rigid as the caress of my tongue keeps darting, sliding, pounding, tasting, and twisting, between her haven folds and deep inside the pink flesh of her womb
My eyes watches hers, as passion tears run down her cheeks
They shut close, as head bucks back, as another set of orgasmic shock waves run through her body
After one last tremor, her body goes limp on my face, we both gasp for air
Her body suddenly flinches as an after shock shakes her womb
She half rolls, and falls next to me on the pillow
Our lips touch, our tongues caress, she moans after tasting her sex on my tongue
Her lips nuzzles my ear, in a whispers she says, "You give good head" and collapses on my pillow
Looking for something soft to lay my head on, I find refuge between her pillow soft breast, and fall into a peaceful sleep

Posted by 1manview at 10:20 PM - 12 Comments   Add a Comment  
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You give good head? Aww I expected something more romantic from you! It was very good besides that as always.  
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by indian (PM , CC ) on Saturday May 10, 2008 @ 11:18 AM




can't stop laughing  
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by Cracker (PM , CC ) on Saturday May 10, 2008 @ 3:50 PM




I like it....I love it!  
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by ^BELLE^ (PM , CC ) on Sunday May 18, 2008 @ 3:34 PM




wow people want you! can i ask who that lady is. or is a few?  
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by Beautiful Day (PM , CC ) on Tuesday May 20, 2008 @ 2:02 PM




I'm going to spank you if you don't stop catching those lines... ... I wrote this for the other poetry site I'm on. The theme last week was Head. I had to sneak it in there somewhere and every time you catch it when I forget to change it before I post it here ... ... I'll take that any day my friend... ... And I shall change that line as soon as I think of something ... ... but right now I have to cook dinner before the boss gets home ... .. Thankz for being you ...  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Tuesday May 20, 2008 @ 5:07 PM




Thank you Crackers..  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Tuesday May 20, 2008 @ 10:41 PM




Thank you very much Belle  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Wednesday May 21, 2008 @ 2:43 PM




Thank you, and yes you may ask, but a gentleman never tells. Especially a married one!  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Wednesday May 21, 2008 @ 10:19 PM




Do you ever get tongue cramps? I do!  
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by Wild Hearts (PM , CC ) on Thursday May 22, 2008 @ 9:42 PM




Oh yea, especially when that word stuck pops up. She wants it, I want her to have it, ouch!
kitty lick
That's when you switch to kitty licks
 
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Friday May 23, 2008 @ 4:51 PM




OMG!!! I think I need a cold shower. Excellent!!!  
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by kitten (PM , CC ) on Friday June 6, 2008 @ 3:33 PM




Thank you for reading this poem. I missed your comment, not too many people read back. I guess I should check my email more often. I appreciate all comments, thanks again 1manview ...  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Monday June 30, 2008 @ 7:21 AM


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

   
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